She loved him
For her Eye contact
Give him strength
To break the Bow
of the world
She loved him
For she got married
Left all the wealth
Post of the Queen
For his Promise
She loved him
For she lived in forest
With only fruits to eat
Wooden floor to sleep
For his request
She loved him
Wished only for a deer
But got kidnapped by demons
Fooling her as a sage
Taken across the ocean
She loved him
For keeping her from harm
Chanting his name gave her strength
She had only that
Being Far away.......
This poem I wrote a Few days back and I think this would be the apt for Poetry United Verse - OMNISCIENCE--- as it is god who know it all and Devi came down knowing she is going to go through all this to teach human race a lesson of love and affection
Love always true
ReplyDeleteFaith, hope and love, the greatest of these is love.
ReplyDeleteThank u.......... I am so honored by ur comment...
DeleteLasha,
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful account of the jourmey and gifts which come through real love, belief and living with honesty.
Thank you for sharing this very original piece of Hindu culture.
Eileen:)
Thank u...... being a Hindu i am so honored to write about my God........
DeleteBeautiful story in a superbly written poem! "Love endures all things".
ReplyDeleteIt was love after all was'nt it?
ReplyDeleteso simple and yet we forget
you have wonderfully transformed their story into much more than what we have grown up listening to. lovely write.
ReplyDeleteThank you.... Yes..... We can interpret Ramayana in our own ways.... What my mother used to teach me and what i have got out of it......
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