April 10, 2013

Color of Life...

I see around me....
Colors that gives wonder
Blue sky reflecting in Blue sea.
Brown trunk and green leaves.....

I see around me.........
Color that gives wonder.............
Black Men in white suit....
White Men in Dark suit........

I see around me............
Color that gives wonder............
In the eyes of my son....
Who see the world from me...............


I am not  a gr8 poet....... I am just writing after all the inspirations from your site.............. Please forgive me if there are mistake in my writing.................. Thanks for the opportunity.............
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23 comments :

  1. AnonymousApr 10, 2013, 2:57:00 PM

    I really liked this and think you wrote a beautiful poem.

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  2. Lisa WilliamsApr 10, 2013, 4:17:00 PM

    Such a lovely poem!

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  3. UnknownApr 10, 2013, 7:39:00 PM

    This is wonderful! Rich with meaning and acceptance, love and diversity. You did a great job! Keep joining us at Poets United, and be sure to visit the others who posted.
    ~Kim

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    1. Aishwarya MageshApr 11, 2013, 3:26:00 PM

      Yes i love this site and i keep reading all the poem, much as i can

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  4. Sherry Blue SkyApr 10, 2013, 8:38:00 PM

    I loved seeing these things through your eyes and, especially the lines about your son seeing the world through you. Beautiful!

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    1. Aishwarya MageshApr 11, 2013, 3:28:00 PM

      Thank you! Yes i live for my son and seeing him smile is face

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  5. alan1704Apr 10, 2013, 11:32:00 PM

    Colour that gives me wonder - so rich with beauty and love. Really great writing.

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  6. Maude LynnApr 11, 2013, 6:29:00 AM

    I think this is lovely!

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  7. Aishwarya MageshApr 11, 2013, 11:36:00 AM

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  8. MargaretApr 11, 2013, 9:09:00 PM

    Very nice observations.

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  9. LLM CallingApr 12, 2013, 12:36:00 AM

    I love all thecolours and their inspiration

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  10. Rosemary Nissen-WadeApr 12, 2013, 4:17:00 AM

    A lovely progression!

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  11. UnknownApr 12, 2013, 6:25:00 PM

    so true how our children learn to see the world from us!

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  12. MaryApr 12, 2013, 6:26:00 PM

    This is beautiful. I don't think there is anything more wonderful than to see things through the eyes of our children and for us to share with our children things through our eyes. (And don't sell yourself short as a poet. This is very nice.)

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  13. JinksyApr 12, 2013, 11:21:00 PM

    Great last stanza - eyes reflect the colour of love! :)

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  14. Stormcat PoetryApr 13, 2013, 2:12:00 AM

    I very much enjoyed reading this. I hope you continue to participate.

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    1. Aishwarya MageshApr 15, 2013, 2:39:00 PM

      Yes i love writing and i will keep doing it until my last breath.........
      Words are all we have left in life to express our inner thoughts

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  15. AnonymousApr 13, 2013, 4:02:00 PM

    beautiful...especially the last stanza...
    Sreeja
    writingonjusttowrite.blogspot.com

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  16. echoesofthehillApr 14, 2013, 1:51:00 AM

    Despite your apologies, you did well.
    So profound is this line"
    'Black Men in white suit....
    White Men in Dark suit........'

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  17. Aishwarya MageshApr 15, 2013, 2:30:00 PM

    Thank you sir........ just glad u loved it

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