January 13, 2014

Price Life


Haunted scenes of past
Impact present
Illuminates Future
One storm
Litter pool of mess
Around us
Need for the others
Is found
Price we need to pay
For lifeless remote space
for which we fight everyday

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5 comments :

  1. aspiritofsimplicityJan 13, 2014, 6:03:00 PM

    i like this. Very succinct and nicely placed words.

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  2. AnonymousJan 13, 2014, 8:26:00 PM

    Your brevity emphasizes your message,

    Elizabeth

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  3. UnknownJan 13, 2014, 9:34:00 PM

    I like the illustration to go with your wonderful poem.

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  4. Brother OllieJan 13, 2014, 9:43:00 PM

    tight piece!

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  5. Sabra BowersJan 14, 2014, 5:40:00 PM

    The first two lines caught me. I like your concise poem.

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