As we see the poor
Rise to the top
Rich cant accept
For he is ordinary of all
Rich man who are you
You came as the poor do
He has fought out life
You have it all
So do you know
Do you have it all
God has made a place
For its a place what to deserve
Don't go head high
cause you will fall
God knows your life
You dont want to show...
God has not given you all
For you dont treat
Everyone right at all ....
For Poets United
Your ideas are heart felt, Lasha.
ReplyDeleteMoving poem, Lasha, containing the warning from title to end--but also the hope, I think, that awakening in this life is possible.
ReplyDeletea very nice poem.
ReplyDeleteThis works really well and it packs a strong message
ReplyDeleteback to the five elements - we all come from and go back!
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