Its a lovely lonely night.For a beautiful lonely time....
Surrounded by people
Over the time.
Now I am all alone in vain
My legs are week,
My hands and elbows dont meet,
Life is a strain
But being alone
In the lovely moon
Shinning high
with mild light
Spray through your body
Giving you a chill thrill
From inside
Knowing you are surrounded
by ones departed...
to show the care......
Beautiful imagery..:)
ReplyDeletenice....being alone does not have to mean you are by yourself...sometimes you can be lonely in a crowd...the cloud of ancestors around us is some solace....smiles. happy new year to you.
ReplyDeleteSometimes in a person's alone time they CAN reflect on those who have gone before and hopefully remember some good times as well. I like the picture which inspired your poem, Lasha.
ReplyDeleteThis paints a lovely picture, loneliness is a hard subject, but you have touched it with care. Well done.
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