I just thought of what would be the Universe for different moments and i came up with this small Poem....... it might be funny or even odd....... But i like the way i have come up.......... Thanks Kim for this wonderful prompt................
Universe We say the Twinkling Stars
the World that we are
Universe we say Man and women
The animals and birds
Universe we say Your home you stay
My Life as a pray
Universe we say One times food for the Hungry beggar
One mini sleep for the sleeps worrier
Universe we say Child's smile for the new mother
Glowing Eyes for the Father
Universe we say Ray of light for the hopeless
Trees shadow for the Homeless
Universe we say Claps of the audience for a proformer
Word of appreciation for the non-performer
Universe we say Joy of want in the lovers eyes
Promise of love for the whole life.........
Verse First, Kim Nelson, Muriel Rukeyser
Lasha... I tried several times to comment at your site, but was each time redirected to a file not found page.
Your poem is made up of images and instances that create a wonderful world. It made me smile
Lasha, it wouldnt let me comment either - but you have written a poem full of images of this wonderful old planet! Love the twinkling stars!