You free other
for if only
you free yourself...
We live in a world of commitment
Where we are knot
with the life cycle
Mothers Love holding us from flying
Father care making us stay there
Got married
Thought freedom was right here
Under your ear
well you were wrong
Freedom is totally gone
Now you have to support yourself
Take care of your new family
Cook, clean, eat, work, drive........
Hoof
Its a long day
Dont even relax for a time
Cant even watch a show at times
Kids, Birth, Health,
Support, stay, care,
You start where your parents lift you
Where to think of a free life
For me to even talk
The function of free-dom
Poem 1
Want to free the Birds
From the Hunters
Want to free the Fishes
From the fisherman
Want to free the Trees
From the wood cutter
Want to free the water
From contamination
Want to free the women
From the abusing man
Want to free the Child
from the orphans
Want to free the mother earth
From exploitation......
Lasha... I tried several times to comment at your site, but was each time redirected to a file not found page.
Your poem is made up of images and instances that create a wonderful world. It made me smile
Sherry Blue SkyMay 15, 2013 at 9:02 PM
Lasha, it wouldnt let me comment either - but you have written a poem full of images of this wonderful old planet! Love the twinkling stars!