without martial facts
Man with
Ideal maps
Direction unknown
with unreal tracks
Walking together
with all dreams smashed
This was a tough one for me.. As I am new to these formats.... Hope i did well.... Waiting for ur feed backs.
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I think you did exceptionally well, there is a lot of emotions/pain, it was tough I hadn't used this form either. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThank u....
DeleteHope. Realized. Unrealized. And hope again.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this prompt! Often our dreams are destroyed but there are always new ones to replace them.
ReplyDeleteGood one!hope at the end!
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