In the snow covered lay
Was born the white angel
Without anyways face of discriminate
To create peace
To make the joy
For world space
In the hot summer heat
was born the evil demon
to destroy the maze
To destroy maze
To make the place
Red Blood spray
In the Joyful Rain
Was born the sober shower man
Sought between the Snow and heat
In the blue white and pale
Evaporates and colds down
With both the Angel and Demons Place.
Posted for Grace's Poetics: Color Me Spring ~ at dVerse Poets Pub.
very interesting play between the cold and hot...the wet.. joy and what is inbetween..ha...i like the sober shower man...made me smile..
ReplyDeletethe shower man that bridges the gap, tamping away both the cold and heat...def interesting...a third way to see through the extremes
ReplyDeleteinteresting...i did not remember this one...we are cast to play the center in between...or at least that is the role we have assumed...
Delete....a mediator of sorts....coming between to balance, compromise or otherwise even the scale....nice.
ReplyDeletethe middle path well played!
ReplyDeleteThe rhythm pushes the reader forward with strength and elegance. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful play with colors. Well done. Enjoyed the contrast of summer, winter and rainy season.
ReplyDeleteVery nice rhythm too..
ReplyDeleteAh the contrasts in this is really nice.. I think that reality is created largely in the contrast between opposites.. really nice..
ReplyDeleteI like the contrast of snow and heat ~ Thanks for linking up ~
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ReplyDeletecold, heat and the sober shower between