Place I love
Is the place I like to lace
Your comforting heart
Is where I am placed
Place I love
Is the beauty of man
Your lovely words
Is where my heart is chased
Place I love
Is also Gods resting place
Your lovely love
Is where you place me a pace
Place I love
Is where I am safe
Your mind is all inside
is where we are happy to stay
the place i love is a heart.... I like to make a impression on people and win people.......... Human heart is the most beautiful place and I like to be in as many people mind as I can..... Thank u all.... Your have made me a place and Kim you are the person who inspired me the most and I wouldn't miss a Wednesday prompt for it makes me write more....Love You all and thank you all for giving me a space in this group............
Poets United - Place you Love..
Lovely piece.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very nice take on the prompt,very sweet.
ReplyDeleteI like the repetition and the pace here, like a heartbeat.
ReplyDeleteIt is so heartwarming to hear your happiness at finding Verse First, kiddo. I remember when I first found Poets United. OMG. It DOES inspire and motivate and encourage us to keep writing. Loved your poem.....a heart is a wonderful place in which to find a home.
ReplyDeleteThank u Sherry...... You were wonderful....... And thanks for calling me Kiddo i am actually 30yrs old.... Half ur age I guess.... Anyway...its been long some one called me like that..... You have made my day .............
Deleteyou have made the best place your home........ great take on the prompt..
ReplyDeleteA gentle and expressive poem. Written superbly.
ReplyDeletePoets United is a nice place to spread your wings isn't it.
ReplyDelete"place" I like how you use it here (but I do have a hard time reading yor white words on the background you have chosen.
ReplyDeleteThe heart really is a glorious place and the rooms can be warmed and opened to others
ReplyDeletebeautiful words!!!
What an absolutely lovely idea and lovely poem.
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